The last day light
Jewels was coming out of a grocery store when she was pulled into a van. A specialised Serial Killer detective Neils Wung noticed a similarity to an old case, May 1972.

Two hours before, I decided what I was going to wear for tomorrow because the girls had invited me to a Jazz evening, the ritual of our Thursdays evenings. I couldn't grasp this reality that had torn me away from a simple daily pleasure. Was it a nightmare? ... Then the more I felt the tremors of the van, the more the reality was unbearable to me. A nauseating smell hit me between the taste of blood which clotted, hardly flowing from my nose to my lips, I was drowned in a smell of putrefaction, of old blood, strange to find myself saying that as if I knew that smell!
I could feel that we had left the road to drive into a stony field after hours of driving where I found myself between passages where I rocked between drowsiness and reality, the noises and the faces became more and more blurred. The smell of fresh earth had penetrated the van where the daylight could appear on this floor which kept the secret of horrible things that had happened before I was captured...
Naïad
Escape Game
ReplyDeleteI am left unlocked, although this is never the case for long.
Unlocked but closed. Until I am yanked open, slammed and locked fast with a deft, violent movement. I am rattled, punched with tiny fists, kicked with tiny feet. But I do not give. I am solid-locked until the punching and the kicking has long ceased.
I am locked no longer but opened gently and closed softly. I am not rattled, nor punched with tiny fists nor kicked with tiny feet.
I am left unlocked.
For there is no longer any possibility of escape.
Although this is never the case for long.
Not in this game.
Hi,
ReplyDeleteThank you for taking time to read and comment.
I am absolutely thrilled with the dimension You have given through the depth of your writing you shared which also gives a dark beauty to the poetic spirit. Your dimension is pushing to another level. The riddle aspect offers a philosophical view too.
Thank you so much.
Naïad x